Monday, May 11, 2009

First love...


Do you think that this is love?
Or this is the purest love;
Do you also feel this love?
Or this is jus ma love;

Oh baby tell me,
Whats between you and me?
Oh baby tell me,
What this is gonna be...

Do you think that we will make it?
or you wan me to just break it;
But Baby, the more I like it..
Thats the way i really wan it.!!

Oh baby tell me,
Whats between you and me?
Oh baby tell me,
What this is gonna be...


I would go all the way for you,
for jus one word from you..


Baby if you really want to know,
I feel lik i'm an arrow stuck in ur bow..
waiting for ur heart strings to pull
me more closer to you..

I dont want you to let me go,
coz your the best thing I know..
And the most beautiful thing
that has happened to me..

I have dreamt about this day,
wishing that it would never be this way..

You have left me in a confusion,
or Is it jus my assumption..?

I need to know whats all this,
which has left me in a total bliss...
But I sure don wanna miss
coz its more like the sweetest kiss..

So its all upto you ma dear,
to tell me whether I'm far or near..

But dont take too long to decide,
coz I feel I'm already in a landslide..

So my life lays in your hands
and it is ma only chance...

3 comments:

  1. hey Deepak..smart way of expressing your Love..and its evident that u r in love..tell me whoz that gal! wont you?? :P

    and once again you've proved ur rhyming skill..fantastic lines..keep it up..hope, that gal never leaves u till d end..totally awesome buddy..:)

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  2. Oh Oh.. Its not dat i hav to kill some1 to knw whats murder.. Likewise i need not be in luv to write abt it.. :)

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  3. hey bro.. i like the song from the middle . "but baby i more like it" is this grammatically correct. since the stanzas from the middle are so awesome, i lose my interest in the first two stanzas. they don't make sense.

    i loved all of it from the fourth stanza.
    "heart strings to pull closer"- beautiful :)

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